Graduate Program Sample essay excerpt

Filed under graduate admissions, March 28th, 2010 by Essay Specialist

Sample essay (first paragraph)

My excellent academic background and relevant work experiences have contributed to my growth as an individual and as a professional. In school, I was one of the top ranked students from primary school up to my college education at the university. In my line of work, I tutor children and help them improve their skills and achieve their academic goals. I have the patience as well as the commitment to help my students to progress both as individuals and as learners. With my interest in working with children and my dedication to helping them realize their potentials, I have decided to enroll in this graduate program.

Outline:

I. Personal biographical information

A. Educational background – My biography shows my educational background, and I believe this is useful in any application for a graduate program. It shows how I was ranked among the top students in one of the most competitive schools in the country, both in my high school and at the university.

B. Subjects I focused on – My educational background also shows which subjects I have concentrated on such as Mathematics, Physics, and Chemistry.

II. Tutor Resume

My tutor resume shows my extensive experience in the field of tutoring and teaching from the periods 2006 to 2008. This resume shows the subjects I have handled, such as Math, Reading, and Chemistry. Not only was I involved in tutoring, but I was also committed to tracking the progress of the children, as far as their math, reading, and chemistry skills and laboratory projects are concerned. Furthermore, I was able to help students realize their academic objectives, be it in making a marked improvement on their poor grades or maintaining their stellar academic performances as A-listers. Finally, as a tutor, this resume shows my ability and patience to assist students in their projects and assignments, giving them the needed help while allowing them to solve problems on their own.

III. Why getting into a graduate program is my next step

I believe that my specialized educational background and my extensive work experience have equipped me with the right knowledge to be qualified for the assistantship program.

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