There are no-no’s which are considered as prevalent, and before you go to more subtle mistakes (like fallacies in logic), you need to consider and recognize them. Blog.internationalstudent.com gives us a substantial article, and here are the key points:
From our point of view, here are the 5 most common admissions essay mistakes:
1. Tonal and Narrative Balance – We have mentioned this before, but the key to effective admissions writing is finding a balance between humanity and authenticity, while targeting the prompt and preserving language sophistication. This balance is shifted depending on the level of the applicant (MBA [...]

In case you are sick and tired of reading those very looooong articles about personal statement examples/essays, then I have something short for you. (I have read those long ones, they are like tomes). Anyway, the mydailyfind.com blog has a noteworthy article, and this is what it says:
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What are the “ingredients” of a good argumentative personal statement? Let us hear and talk about (just a bit) what customessayblog.com says in their article.
Students must check the persuasive techniques used in a sample argumentative essay
The real check for a sample argumentative essay would be exploring the methods [...] Continue Reading…

Now this is difficult, while I strongly believe that a purely original personal statement is ideal, I also believe that some individuals are so, so busy (you know, the community youth leader cum athlete cum etcetera), that going to custom essay writing firms is a very strong temptation. For [...] Continue Reading…

Choosing a theme(s) for your personal statement examples or admission essays is the first step, but it is a crucial one. The student-focused myeducationblogonline.com’s blog has plenty to say about this topic. Let me dissect some of their high points:
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Do you feel that the personal statement examples you’ve come up with lack the “punch”? If so, then here are certain attributes that are probably lacking in your essays. The interesting cvwriting.bravejournal.com blog has some pointers that will do you a lot of good. Let us hear some of [...] Continue Reading…

Lazy applicants simply write about the first thing on their minds, and usually, they finish the essays in record time. These applicants, however, may not be given a chance for interviews by submitting a very poor admission essay.

Different schools hold different methods of filtering their hundreds of applicants. As an applicant, you should know that there are two main kinds of essay prompts: the general and the specific.

Even if the academic program you are applying for is not a language course, admissions officers who are tasked to read your essay would hate it if your personal statement is riddled with subject-verb agreement errors and so many misplaced punctuations. Beware of this trap.

HoboStudent seems to have a mission to inform and aid students how to get through college without much money. The blog has topics like Obtaining Beer with Little to No Money and The Secret to a Free Haircut.

